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Wednesday, 19 June 2013
5 Sentence Challenge - Brooke
...Hidden Treasure... Once upon a time there was a mean old pirate. He was sailing to an island. I know he was a pirate because he had a map. He found an X on the hot sandy old island. "I found the treasure" he said.
Well I'm very disappointed that such a mean pirate found treasure Brooke. It is such a shame that generous folks didn't find it because they would then share it I'm sure!Thank you for thinking so carefully about your sentences!
Well I'm very disappointed that such a mean pirate found treasure Brooke. It is such a shame that generous folks didn't find it because they would then share it I'm sure!Thank you for thinking so carefully about your sentences!
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