...Hidden Treasure...
Once upon a time there was a girl named Ella and a boy named Ben. They were 8 and 7. One day their mum and dad said "you can go to the playground after we are done gardening". When they were done they were going to the park. They found treasure and they were rich forever.
Wednesday 19 June 2013
5 Sentence Challenge - Ryan
...Hidden Treasure...
Once upon a time there was a pirate. He was sailing across the dirty sea. He got to an island. He saw an X so he dug and he found the hidden treasure. In the treasure there was money and a crown and a necklace.
Once upon a time there was a pirate. He was sailing across the dirty sea. He got to an island. He saw an X so he dug and he found the hidden treasure. In the treasure there was money and a crown and a necklace.
5 Sentence Challenge - Brooke
...Hidden Treasure...
Once upon a time there was a mean old pirate. He was sailing to an island. I know he was a pirate because he had a map. He found an X on the hot sandy old island. "I found the treasure" he said.
Once upon a time there was a mean old pirate. He was sailing to an island. I know he was a pirate because he had a map. He found an X on the hot sandy old island. "I found the treasure" he said.
5 Sentence Challenge - Terry
...Hidden Treasure...
One day a pirate sailed a ship. He crashed on an island. He found an X. He dug and dug and found the treasure. He wore a necklace.
One day a pirate sailed a ship. He crashed on an island. He found an X. He dug and dug and found the treasure. He wore a necklace.
5 Sentence Challenge - Jerrod
...Hidden Treasure...
I went on a treasure hunt to find some golden treasure. I wanted to hunt for a pirate. I wanted to get the treasure box because I wanted to get money. I don't have the key. I have got the key from the pirate.
I went on a treasure hunt to find some golden treasure. I wanted to hunt for a pirate. I wanted to get the treasure box because I wanted to get money. I don't have the key. I have got the key from the pirate.
5 Sentence Challenge - Alex
...Hidden Treasure...
We were in a car. I said "mum I can see some treasure". We wished we could go with the pirate. Next morning we opened the treasure we said "money". We dug and dug inside were coins.
We were in a car. I said "mum I can see some treasure". We wished we could go with the pirate. Next morning we opened the treasure we said "money". We dug and dug inside were coins.
5 Sentence Challenge - Tru
...Hidden Treasure...
Once upon a time there was a flying unicorn in the jungle. It was tangled in vines so I helped her. In return for helping her she took me for a ride on her to see some treasure. The treasure was gold and Justin Bieber albums. I was so happy.
Once upon a time there was a flying unicorn in the jungle. It was tangled in vines so I helped her. In return for helping her she took me for a ride on her to see some treasure. The treasure was gold and Justin Bieber albums. I was so happy.
5 Sentence Challenge - Cruz
...Hidden Treasure...
Once upon a time there was an ice girl called Fufu and a fire boy called Ben. They were looking for shiny hidden treasure. So they dug a giant hole. They saw a creeper. So they attacked the creeper and they saw a chest.
Once upon a time there was an ice girl called Fufu and a fire boy called Ben. They were looking for shiny hidden treasure. So they dug a giant hole. They saw a creeper. So they attacked the creeper and they saw a chest.
5 Sentence Challenge - Tai
...Hidden Treasure...
Once there was a pirate. He was searching for treasure. He dug and he dug and he felt something in the ground. So he dug until he found a treasure box. He opened it up it had jewels in it.
Once there was a pirate. He was searching for treasure. He dug and he dug and he felt something in the ground. So he dug until he found a treasure box. He opened it up it had jewels in it.
5 Sentence Challenge - Demi
...Hidden Treasure...
Once upon a time there was a pirate. He was hunting for the hidden treasure for months. The pirate found the X under a tree. He dug up the sand. He found the treasure box.
Once upon a time there was a pirate. He was hunting for the hidden treasure for months. The pirate found the X under a tree. He dug up the sand. He found the treasure box.
5 Sentence Challenge - Kyel
...Hidden Treasure...
One day there was a poor girl and boy. They decided to ask their mum and dad if they could go and find some treasure. They looked and looked. They went in their dads boat and got to the island. They saw the treasure on the X and they were never poor again.
One day there was a poor girl and boy. They decided to ask their mum and dad if they could go and find some treasure. They looked and looked. They went in their dads boat and got to the island. They saw the treasure on the X and they were never poor again.
5 Sentence Challenge - Bethany
...Hidden Treasure...
Once I saw a dirty man looking for treasure. I came to him and he let me dig too. I dug and dug until we found the treasure. He let me have some treasure. I was rich.
Once I saw a dirty man looking for treasure. I came to him and he let me dig too. I dug and dug until we found the treasure. He let me have some treasure. I was rich.
5 Sentence Challenge - Mwilwa
...Hidden Treasure...
One day a boy named Jack was planting plants. Suddenly he hit a box. It was a treasure box. Jack shouted "Mum, Dad I found treasure". I found gold.
One day a boy named Jack was planting plants. Suddenly he hit a box. It was a treasure box. Jack shouted "Mum, Dad I found treasure". I found gold.
5 Sentence Challenge - Eric
...Hidden Treasure...
Yesterday I went to an island. At the island I saw a pirate. I played with him. I tried his sword. I dug for treasure and I found gold and coins.
Yesterday I went to an island. At the island I saw a pirate. I played with him. I tried his sword. I dug for treasure and I found gold and coins.
Friday 14 June 2013
Thursday 13 June 2013
Reading Activities - Retell
Some of the children in Room 11 decided to do a little play for their reading activity today using the puppets and filming with the ipad...here is a snap shot of their filming in progress...
Reading Activity - Retell from Pinehill11 on Vimeo.
Reading Activity - Retell from Pinehill11 on Vimeo.
Wednesday 5 June 2013
Tuesday 4 June 2013
Tai tells us about Coal.....
Tai shares his video with Room 11. He could not bring Coal into school so he made a video to share his pet with us.
My Dog Coal from Maraea Rameka on Vimeo.
Gus comes to visit...
We are learning about Pets and Farm Animals. James brought his dog Gus in to visit our class and he made a special book to tell us about how he looks after Gus.
Gus comes to visit from Pinehill11 on Vimeo.
Sunday 2 June 2013
NZ School Time Lapse
Room 11 have been involved in a NZ School Time Lapse
with other schools around New Zealand.
Take a look at the finished product!
Well done all the classes involved.
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