Wednesday, 23 October 2013

Bethany 5 Sentence Challenge

After school the little boy was going to the vet to get his dog fixed.  He was pushing in front of the line and the vet said, "OK you can get your dog fixed first."  "It has a broken leg" said the little boy.  Lets put a bandage on your little dog then you can go home little boy.  He was happy to go home.


  1. Mrs Skinner (Team100)1 November 2013 at 11:39

    You have a great imagination Bethany! I love the way you have used it with the picture and the story of the little boy. Your writing is certainly coming along very well. Keep it up!

  2. What a lovely piece of writing Bethany. I like how you have used speech to tell us more of a story. I wonder how the dog hurt his leg in the first place.
    From Miss D, Sumner Sumner School, Christchurch


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