Wednesday, 19 June 2013

5 Sentence Challenge - Brooke

...Hidden Treasure...
Once upon a time there was a mean old pirate.  He was sailing to an island.  I know he was a pirate because he had a map.  He found an X on the hot sandy old island.  "I found the treasure" he said.

1 comment:

  1. Mrs Skinner (Team100)20 June 2013 at 01:40

    Well I'm very disappointed that such a mean pirate found treasure Brooke. It is such a shame that generous folks didn't find it because they would then share it I'm sure!Thank you for thinking so carefully about your sentences!


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