A super fantastic Year 2 class :)
Browns Bay, Auckland, New Zealand
Sounds like my sort of treasure Ryan. I can see that you have thought very carefully about your writing. thank you for sharing it with us!
Wow!I am impressed with your adjectives e.g.'He was sailing across the dirty sea.'Try using more sentence openers next time.Cheers.
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