A super fantastic Year 2 class :)
Browns Bay, Auckland, New Zealand
My word! What a luck strike Jack had finding that treasure Mwilwa. We are very lucky too to be able to read your writing. Thank you!
That was lucky Mwilwa. I would have loved to find treasure in my garden!! Well done for capital letters, full stops, commas and speech marks! What an impressive piece of writing!However,you could add an exclamation mark (!) after Jack shouts to his Mum and Dad!
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