Wednesday, 19 June 2013

5 Sentence Challenge - Tai

...Hidden Treasure...
Once there was a pirate.  He was searching for treasure.  He dug and he dug and he felt something in the ground.  So he dug until he found a treasure box.  He opened it up it had jewels in it.

1 comment:

  1. ethan(team 5sc)21 June 2013 at 00:00

    Ethan(team 5sc)
    i really liked the bit were you found the treasure Tai. I would maybe recommend a bit more discription but well done for your brilliant.


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