Wednesday 19 June 2013

5 Sentence Challenge - Demi

...Hidden Treasure...
Once upon a time there was a pirate.  He was hunting for the hidden treasure for months.  The pirate found the X under a tree.  He dug up the sand.  He found the treasure box.

2 comments:

  1. Mrs Skinner (Team100)20 June 2013 at 01:34

    Well, it would seem that if you keep going on something you will eventually find it Demi! Well done the pirate and well done you for some super sentences!

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  2. Alena BVS (Team 5sc)21 June 2013 at 00:05

    Well done Demi these are very good sentences and a very interesting story. Again well done!

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