Wednesday, 19 June 2013

5 Sentence Challenge - Kyel

...Hidden Treasure...
One day there was a poor girl and boy.  They decided to ask their mum and dad if they could go and find some treasure.  They looked and looked.  They went in their dads boat and got to the island.  They saw the treasure on the X and they were never poor again.


  1. Mrs Skinner (Team100)20 June 2013 at 01:38

    This is a story with a very happy ending Kyel. I like those sort! Thank you for thinking hard about your writing and sharing it!.

  2. Tamsin (team5sc)21 June 2013 at 00:05

    Kyel i think you have done very well with your 5 sentence challenge.I liked reading about the boy and girl who found some tresure.


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